Descriptive Writing

For writing this week we have been working on descriptive writing. Mrs Clark gave us this picture and
we had to brainstorm Nouns, Verbs, Adverbs, and Adjectives that we thought could help
describe the picture . We used the words to create a paragraph.

After we had written we then self assessed to see witch of the description words we used.

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

Adjectives	Nouns	Verbs	Adverbs
broken	Beach	Crashing	Loudly
Shipwreck	Sea
	Lake brunner

My paragraph:

It is a cloudy day but it looks like there's barely any water in the sea and those
two broken ships over their they look like they have been there for over twenty yea
rs. That place where the ships are it looks a bit like lake brunner but then again i
could be rong. The shipwrecks could of crashed loudly