Friday 20 October 2017

grandparents reflection

this is what happend when my Nanna was born well not exactly what happend when she was born but i hope you learn something.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Seamus its Sophie from st Patricks. I like the way you have chose to write about what it was like when your Nanna was born and how it was different, next time you could re-read through your work and make sure you have capital letter in the right place and punctuation in the right place. Otherwise you have done some good work keep the hard work up.

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.