Thursday 22 October 2020

My GrandParents House

Today we have been writing about our grandparents and their house what the house looks like smells like feels like and sounds like.


Looks like- A lot of time and effort into the lawns.


Smells like- The smell of a New House.



Feels like-  Warm.



Sounds like- Quiet.
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown23 October 2020 at 12:55

    Hi there Seamus Kalani here from T2 in Greymain School this is a great piece of work here but i think you should write a bit more from Kalani

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  2. Whaea Sue1 November 2020 at 14:15

    Kia ora Seamus, Your poem describes your grandparents house well. It seems like their home is very tidy, cosy and safe and a place you enjoy visiting.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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